Heat Wave Part 2 Adult Short Stories for Women Adult Short Stories for Women Series edition by EM Flemming Literature Fiction eBooks
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Sensual Summer Reads An Adult Short Story for Women
Part 2 of the Heat Wave Erotica Short Stories for Women Series
After sleeping with her best friend's husband, Sara Beckett finds herself entangled in a Web of lies and deceit.
This hot-blooded, sexual temptress certainly knows how to get what she wants from men. But when she finds herself knee deep in a very touch-and-go situation, she begins to question her own morality..
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Heat Wave Part 2 Adult Short Stories for Women Adult Short Stories for Women Series edition by EM Flemming Literature Fiction eBooks
I wanted to like this, but it's just not for me. The story dragged on, with the first person narrator telling, rather than showing, the reader a lot of tedious things about what sort of person she is, and it seemed like maybe this is a person I could at least root for even if I don't relate to her or like her. But then when the action starts it turns out that she's way too much of a backstabber for me to root for. She betrays her friend, and then she experiences only a brief twinge of guilt before deciding to gleefully destroy this same friend, as if the previous betrayal were not sufficient. A former best friend who had done nothing whatsoever to hurt the main character, other than being married to a man the main character lusted after. By the time the installment ended, I was actively hoping the main character and her lover would crash and burn, and that the beleaguered friend would emerge with the power and the money.Then it ended on a cliffhanger. You guys, this isn't a short story. It's a segment of a serial novel. Short stories have their own story arc, complete with a conclusion. I wasn't expecting to get to the end and discover that I had to buy another installment, which would probably involve a tedious narration of the main character speechifying about her character traits, to find out what happens next.
One could argue that the most important thing in a story like this is really the sex anyway, but that felt uninspired too. There didn't seem to be any emotional connection between the two partners, so the one lone sex scene played out like a really low budget porno. And this is the man for whom the character is going to crush her best friend. Ugh.
I decided I didn't want to see what happened next. I don't want to see these characters scheme and hurt and use each other. I guess I wanted something more romantic, rather than just humping.
Which isn't to say that I don't think this story could work for some readers. Jackie Collins makes a good living writing stories like this. But it's not to my taste, and I think it needs more revision. More showing rather than telling throughout. Maybe more foreplay in the sex scene. Something.
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Heat Wave Part 2 Adult Short Stories for Women Adult Short Stories for Women Series edition by EM Flemming Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
I wish the book was written as one book instead of in parts, it would hold your attention better..after buying book 1&2 I don't think I'll be wasting my money on anymore of these..
Bought it , read it but it wasn't all that heated. I won't be purchasing further books written by Fleming.
This read has every good quality in a book that is sought after. The characters are all unique and are a part of many crazy plot twists and and scenes that leave you wanting more and more. There isn't a single chapter that doesn't lack the great detail that paints a vivid picture of every scene and all the important parts of the environment right into your mind. It doesn't take long for the suspense to really kick in with this book, and I found myself wondering what would I do if I were in the protagonists position - and ofcourse, I had to find out what she was going to do. I had no idea what was about to unfold, things start to get hot and heated very quickly. I couldn't be more pleased with this book, it's perfect in every way
I wanted to like this, but it's just not for me. The story dragged on, with the first person narrator telling, rather than showing, the reader a lot of tedious things about what sort of person she is, and it seemed like maybe this is a person I could at least root for even if I don't relate to her or like her. But then when the action starts it turns out that she's way too much of a backstabber for me to root for. She betrays her friend, and then she experiences only a brief twinge of guilt before deciding to gleefully destroy this same friend, as if the previous betrayal were not sufficient. A former best friend who had done nothing whatsoever to hurt the main character, other than being married to a man the main character lusted after. By the time the installment ended, I was actively hoping the main character and her lover would crash and burn, and that the beleaguered friend would emerge with the power and the money.
Then it ended on a cliffhanger. You guys, this isn't a short story. It's a segment of a serial novel. Short stories have their own story arc, complete with a conclusion. I wasn't expecting to get to the end and discover that I had to buy another installment, which would probably involve a tedious narration of the main character speechifying about her character traits, to find out what happens next.
One could argue that the most important thing in a story like this is really the sex anyway, but that felt uninspired too. There didn't seem to be any emotional connection between the two partners, so the one lone sex scene played out like a really low budget porno. And this is the man for whom the character is going to crush her best friend. Ugh.
I decided I didn't want to see what happened next. I don't want to see these characters scheme and hurt and use each other. I guess I wanted something more romantic, rather than just humping.
Which isn't to say that I don't think this story could work for some readers. Jackie Collins makes a good living writing stories like this. But it's not to my taste, and I think it needs more revision. More showing rather than telling throughout. Maybe more foreplay in the sex scene. Something.
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